All Comments on '750 Club - Backstage'

So well done, especially in so few words!

How - HOT!

weak

Cheating wives are so hot

I vote for a follow up. I'm dense, I know, but what happened next.? What was the actual meaning of her saying, "Fuck..."?

I didn't intend for any deeper meaning behind that last murmured "fuck" beyond a sexual exclamation, but I'm floored at the idea. No plans to follow this one up, but maybe I'll write a spiritual successor at some point and flesh it out some.

Ian has been writing wee short stories, and will not buy them any more; not as good as the novels. Feel like readers are being cheated on.

Anonymous, in 2022 alone, aside from my short stories, I've put out the following: Hearts and Minds (60k word novel), Teacher's Pet (55k novel), Billionaire's Bequest (90k novel), The Dads Project (roughly 100k series), and under my Grayson Banks pseudonym, Neighborhood Daddy (70k novel/vignettes). That's not counting the short stories. I'm grateful you apparently think highly enough of me to want more of my writing, but there are better ways of going about it than this kind of needless negativity. There will be longer novellas and stories to come. Chill.

Hot hot hot

Slutty wife, it will not end well, but, hot!

A short hot 🔥 story. Nice. Could have fleshed it out more.