by Cagivagurl
Well, the author tried......and crashed and burned. Just like all the rest who have undertaken this ridiculous 750 word nonsense.
Too short and easily predicted early on, and also doesn't make any sense, but hey you go girl!
Too bad this doesn't applied when the wife cheats in this author's stories. Then it is all male ego psycho babble and jsut accept it and move on. Granted he was a prick, but it is interesting that the author never writes stories where the wife is found out and the husband leaves for another woman. At least those are rare.
No twist here. This was so predictable I thought from the 1st sentence what was going to happen.
Fun tale with tye twist.
But it is ironic how when genders are swapped the husband who is the aggrieved party has to just accept it. Just read CVG's "A Marriage in Trouble", and there the husband is supposed to accept a two year affair from a wife who thinks she did absolutely nothing wrong and took nothing from their marriage, only sorry for her mistake that hurt him, but upset when he calls it a betrayal. The hypocrisy is strong with this author. Almost like some vapid attempt at "programming", that women should have stiff spines when cheated upon, and the men should just accept it. Lol. Still well written prose.
Cute farce with a twist. Good for the wife. She had more balls than the men in Cagivagurl stories. In fact, this author always cuts the cheating husband off at the legs (and they invariably deserve it), but the author when the wife is the cheater goes into melodrama psycho babble, fragile male egos, etc. Hypocritical much?