All Comments on '82 Nights with Christine Pt. 01'

I was skeptical at first but wow this is one of the hottest stories I’ve ever read by far, I can’t wait for part 2!

Definitely need part 2.

I thoroughly enjoyed the story, so first of all, thanks for writing and publishing it here on literotica. Delightfully erotic, it was also heart-warmingly wholesome. Poor Noah, his fate was sealed the moment Christy came into his life. There's no way he was going to withstand her advances. I loved the part where she gets him to admit that it's not him helping her out, but the other way around lol.

To your end-of-chapter question, "Can Noah salvage a shred of independence?", I'd say the chances of that happening are slim, given how things have progressed so far. But maybe the lad will surprise us all. I'm also quite interested in why Noah's journal is in his mom's possession, and why she feels that it's her "responsibility... to the wider world" to publish it. Is she also a futa researcher like Noah is planning to be?

- JM

Would you do a story of futa cuckolding? Seems like you’re a fan

This was amazing!!!!! Please part 2 :)

I can hardly believe this is your first story. This was incredibly good! The fact that you took your time slowly developing their relationship and interactions shows just how much more you can bring out of these two and continue this amazing story. I'll be eagerly looking forward to a Part 2 if you decide to write it. Cheers and thank you for this gem!

Omg Noah’s “girlfriend” should come back from abroad but then he gets cucked by Christine

I concur this was a wonderfully slow burn that was wonderfully written. You have a splendid style and really looking forward to part two. Thank you for publishing

Keep up the great work. Look forward to more!

Many thanks to those who've voted or posted kind words in the comments -- the only potential response to the story I would've hated to see was no response at all, so it means a lot (and it definitely encourages me to write more).

To those who've speculated about a cuckold/ntr thing happening in part 2: I couldn't say anything for certain, but it is just *possible* that I threw in a reference to Noah's sort-of-ex-girlfriend to give myself some options down the line.

Part 1 of "Christine" turned out well, I think, but a little different than I intended. I thought I was writing something tense and ominous, almost a horror story. But, as it turns out, Noah is the one telling the story, and Noah's falling in love. So it reads as a heartwarming love story. Weird!

Part 2 is probably a ways off, I'm sorry to say. This is actually the first fiction of any kind I've written, and I'm still learning how to write it at a non-glacial pace. Also there's a good chance that I'm going to work on a cuckqueen story before getting to Part 2. (The good news is that the cuckqueen story should be short, in theory that one might be finished in a week or two.)

This is such a great story. Thanks for posting it. 10/10 Will be holding my breath for part 2

Absolutely amazing. Can't wait for the rest

This was quite comfy to read. First the snuggling and then the casual friendly sex lent to that. Would like to see a part 2 just for the nice vibe this has. The character development was competent and the sex scenes were nice.

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It's pretty self-explanatory what's happening as it was hinted at in the very beginning. The heroine's cum is addictive and the hero is slowly getting hooked on it more and more. And the heroine was a typical futanari with dominant tendencies, but with a huge self-esteem problem which the hero remedied for better or worse.

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But I'm not sure where their character arcs are going. They feel completed. The hero already made peace with submission to the heroine. And the heroine found her confidence and made the hero submit. The physical aspect is quite straight forward: their sex life just progresses naturally to full-blown sex. But I'm less clear on the relationship part. The hero didn't consider the future of this relationship, and we don't know what the heroine is thinking, aside from her being willing to continue it, as she indicated when she invited him to visit her homeland.

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Perhaps the next part can deal with the mentioned considerations? The hero trying to ascertain what relationship he wants in the future, what relationship the heroine wants, whether these two points are different, and whether he has the desire and will to seek a compromise between these two points. The points probably being a boyfriend status, which would make him entitled to romance, reciprocation and agency, and a harem boy status, which will leave him being something between a companion and sex-toy. (Please don't take this as writing advice, I'm merely speculating.)

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Moving on to another topic, I found the dominance quite soft. It's clear why the heroine is being soft, as her dominant qualities are quite freshly sprouted, but I was talking overall. In domination stories, the universe itself conspires against the hero, but there's minimal denial, minimal humiliation and not a plotting (if well meaning) mother or psychologist in sight. Even the futanari cum's effect seems very mild. It really seems like the two main characters' relationship developed by chance. The world's most timid dominatrix and biggest softy, both starving for friendship and human contact, just happened to meet.

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Don't get me wrong, I'm fine with soft domination. It just surprised me in a story about imperial dominant futanari, addictive cum and a psychologically vulnerable protagonist in an enclosed space with the two things previously mentioned. I didn't expect for it to be a chamber story about two people healing each other. Although that did add to the comfyness.

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But to sum up: enjoyed the story and would like to see you write more.

This was quite comfy to read. First the snuggling and then the casual friendly sex lent to that. Would like to see a part 2 just for the nice vibe this has. The character development was competent and the sex scenes were nice.

* * *

It's pretty self-explanatory what's happening as it was hinted at in the very beginning. The heroine's cum is addictive and the hero is slowly getting hooked on it more and more. And the heroine was a typical futanari with dominant tendencies, but with a huge self-esteem problem which the hero remedied for better or worse.

* * *

But I'm not sure where their character arcs are going. They feel completed. The hero already made peace with submission to the heroine. And the heroine found her confidence and made the hero submit. The physical aspect is quite straight forward: their sex life just progresses naturally to full-blown sex. But I'm less clear on the relationship part. The hero didn't consider the future of this relationship, and we don't know what the heroine is thinking, aside from her being willing to continue it, as she indicated when she invited him to visit her homeland.

* * *

Perhaps the next part can deal with the mentioned considerations? The hero trying to ascertain what relationship he wants in the future, what relationship the heroine wants, whether these two points are different, and whether he has the desire and will to seek a compromise between these two points. The points probably being a boyfriend status, which would make him entitled to romance, reciprocation and agency, and a harem boy status, which will leave him being something between a companion and sex-toy. (Please don't take this as writing advice, I'm merely speculating.)

* * *

Moving on to another topic, I found the dominance quite soft. It's clear why the heroine is being soft, as her dominant qualities are quite freshly sprouted, but I was talking overall. In domination stories, the universe itself conspires against the hero, but there's minimal denial, minimal humiliation and not a plotting (if well meaning) mother or psychologist in sight. Even the futanari cum's effect seems very mild. It really seems like the two main characters' relationship developed by chance. The world's most timid dominatrix and biggest softy, both starving for friendship and human contact, just happened to meet.

* * *

Don't get me wrong, I'm fine with soft domination. It just surprised me in a story about imperial dominant futanari, addictive cum and a psychologically vulnerable protagonist in an enclosed space with the two things previously mentioned. I didn't expect for it to be a chamber story about two people healing each other. Although that did add to the comfyness.

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But to sum up: enjoyed the story and would like to see you write more.

You are a fantastic writer! Please, please, please give us more, more more!

Awesome story! It's so rare that we get futa material with any real depth, so this is a real treat, for sure. That being said, I'm not digging the lack of respect and reciprocation from Christy. It might sound silly given the themes, but the most compelling tales of dominance still feature loving care and genuine desire for a partner's happiness, imo. I'm not seeing much of that here. Though written in first person, I believe we'd see more evidence of Christy's regard, if it were true.

I have 5* for your tremendous storytelling skills, but I don't think this one is my cup of tea. Thank you for sharing it!

extremely well crafted story, I really enjoyed the evolving characters and their relationship

wow.. waiting for part 2

Wow.

Wow.

Wow.

But damn you.

Now I'm addicted to your writing like Noah is addicted to Christine production. I don't know what you did put in it but it's soooo good!

Can I beg for more? Pretty Please?

Thanks! And good news for deep_surface, SMDB, and everyone else who's asked about a sequel: Part 2 is one trip to the bedroom away from completion. With a little luck, it *may* be ready for submission in 4-5 days. The bad news is that it doesn't advance the plot as much I envisioned; Part 3 is where we'll have some world-building and a new character or two. But the OTHER good news is that Part 2 will be a bit longer than Part 1, and it will have an awful lot of action. (Why would these characters have an important conversation with their pants ON?)

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Anyway, be sure to keep an eye out.

Damn! I can't wait for more!