All Comments on '99.5 KLRV, The Leader In Rock'

by JimBob44

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Boyd PercyBoyd Percyabout 2 years ago

One of your better efforts!

5

mordbrandmordbrandabout 2 years ago

You are the leader in great stories. Tyvm

KinPAKinPAabout 2 years ago

Completely agree with Boyd Percy…one of your best. I’ve said it before, you don’t write “stories”, you write snapshots of people from your world and that’s damned difficult to do well, let alone exceptionally as you do. Can’t wait for the next trip to it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

5 stars

You are good

.. Leader in Rock is great

Rather than your starting disclaimer on spell check etc, send me your next story at email "pantechs@gmail.com" for a pro bono edit effort you can then polish up

Cheers

ArmorlaArmorlaabout 2 years ago

A rollicking yarn, written entertainment at its best.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Very good! Shows a bit of originality and yes that is a good thing.

pcman1950pcman1950about 2 years ago

I can't remember the last time I had so many, intense, gut-busting, tear-laced belly laughs. I did love your Lizzie!

BuzzCzarBuzzCzarabout 2 years ago

Super job!. I laughed out loud. 5*

dc6370dc6370about 2 years ago

Excellent story!

TiredOldMan502TiredOldMan502about 2 years ago

You stretched out so well on this one. Good job.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Fantastic as always. Five stars! Thanks for sharing your work with us.

sailhikersailhikerabout 2 years ago

One of the best of the recent batch of JB44 greats!

johntcookseyjohntcookseyabout 2 years ago

Standard enemies to lovers fare until the introduction of Lizzy Borden. Once she hit the air I couldn’t wipe the grin off my face. What a well deserved scathing skewering of the mainstream music industry: repetitious overproduced pablum called mainstream pop rock and country, and force fed to the American public. Your articulate critique is spot on. Oh yeah…very sexy too! Thanks much.

buran288buran288about 2 years ago

Always a Good Day to see a JimBob44 Story!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Too Funny! CAn't wait for the next one.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

good as always 6 stars

Vegasrails2Vegasrails2about 2 years ago

Yep for your own amusement and I enjoy almost all of them. Enjoy your day

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Your latest is F'n awesome, as usual. Six stars.

Jedd

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Maybe your best yet.

tennesseeredtennesseeredabout 2 years ago

Nobody around here writes like JB44 and this is one of his best. Have a swell day.

dnsontndnsontnabout 2 years ago

Started my day with a smile! Always sexy and absolutely always a good laugh.

21stcv21stcvabout 2 years ago

Excellent and thank you for writing such great stories

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Fun read!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

great jb44 story: " when someone shows you who they are, believe them." TG both aj and hannah saw the light.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Thank you for another excellent story. I loved the lines:

"Fine, fine, I'll, I'll have sex with you," Hannah sighed deeply, then almost screamed as her car beeped, letting her know she was low on gas.

"Jesus, really?" AJ scoffed. "Wow. My hand's more enthusiastic than that and my hand don't like me. Thinks it's gay to touch my thingy"..."Sorry, Buddy," AJ said to his right hand. "I tried. I really tried. But, guess it's just you and me and some good old Internet porn tonight."

"Hey! I know! I'll get you good and drunk, okay?" AJ said. "How's that? You can tell all your gloves you were drunk, you didn't know what was happening, okay?"

Please keep 'em coming, and thanks again.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Loved the Lizzy Borden part and especially why she had to leave the station. Thought a bit more could have been made of the situation culminating in the attack on the trailer but, all ln all, a great read.

oldmsufanoldmsufanabout 2 years ago

Enjoyed it. First time reading one of your stories. It's a solid 5. I'll have to look at more of your work.

JbRobertssonJbRobertssonabout 2 years ago

You made me laugh and left me in a good mood. Thanks for posting. 5 stars, absolutely.

peter944peter944about 2 years ago

Very different and fresh. The dialog took me a bit to get used to, but in the end I found it made sense . 5 stars.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Ned to do a series on Lizzy Borden Bundy after she gets reprimanded and disbarred for being a smart ass to a snowflake judge once too often.

blackknight314blackknight314almost 2 years ago

Good job, thanks for sharing your work!

NawtyMeNawtyMeover 1 year ago

AbsoFUCKINGlutely loved this story!!!!

I loved how AJ slowly converted his Hannah into anal sex!!!!

LOVED IT!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

There is a direction or place. Their is the possessive word. Do please fix this!!!

CbgnightowlCbgnightowlover 1 year ago

I was an English teacher and I spotted it, but who gives a shit in a great story - five stars.

DreamsToRealityDreamsToRealityabout 1 year ago

There's enough ideas here to build a whole novel on, which is both impressive and disappointing because certain parts of this feel rushed.

I mean all of that as a compliment, basically I wanted to live in this world alot longer than the story allowed me to, which is a testament to your writing. Bravo.

Alik713Alik713about 1 year ago

Dear sir!

Having been an avid follower of yours for quite some time, this is the very first time I actually ventured beyond the effort of giving a story a few stars in the app.

What can I say?

Ignoring the few misspellings, this was simply a work of art.

Somewhat light on erotic content, yet still highly entertaining, utterly engrossing, and easily among one of my favorite stories, this one was pure joy.

I laughed, I cried with laughter, I even got a boner.

Thank you, and thank you, again, for taking the time and putting your words down for our enjoyment.

Cheers!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Honey Bee > LBB. Good story though.

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

great story. keep t up. very enjoyable

HOG57headHOG57head11 months ago

I really like your stories. I love the setting, the characters and the action. Thank you for sharing

roveroneroverone10 months ago

liked it-the characters ...glad they didn't get torched at end, and she beat off Doyle, got her client Brown safe, that the cop didn't die so he can have his day in court-he's already confessed so....

I always go down on my gf and get her off at least once before rogering her rump...not supposed to hurt...they've got the lube so not enough foreplay...putting a small butt plug in while getting her off PIV helps her associate pleasure with her sphincter clamping down on something in her ass before even attempting to bugger her helps-also have to concentrate on her relaxing/pushing out like she's trying to take a dump as he attempts to enter eases insertion

DwarfLord50DwarfLord506 months ago

That was a lot of fun! Thank you. There were a couple of transitions between scenes that threw me for a few minutes, but all-in-all, well done.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

that was a pretty good read,thanks .

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

I don’t know what it means to stars force tires are five stars. I can say I enjoyed reading it very much. This is the second story I’ve read of yours and I’ve enjoyed both of them very much. Thank you keep up the good work.

DLA. Owosso Michigan

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