All Comments on 'It Wants What It Wants Pt. 2'

Crazy man. Loved it! Keep writing more stuff like this. Its super fun! Kudos!

That's funny. That's the same point at which I stopped reading your story, and just went to the end to see if you really did crash and burn this otherwise compelling plot and riveting characters.

Its just sex. Usually a lie, but in this case that's what you boiled this story down to, just sex. The intellectual and emotional components became props, background, useful but insignificant scenery and plants, just to fill in the gaps between the . . . sex.

Some very shallow small minded people think Literotica is a porn site that includes some stories. For those with the depth and the vision its a Literature site where the authors are allowed to include in graphic detail the sex that accompanies stories about love, romance, betrayal, perversion, cruelty, success, and loss. Yours was one of those stories, until you steered it into ridiculous single-minded demonstration of fucking. Technique, position, duration, intensity, and energy. Kind of a NFL fuckathon video, Best Of.

Too bad you ditched the hearts and minds in preference to vaginas and penises. Really really large penises, of course; the only kind that have any effect on a "real" woman, with huge tits. But that's redundant. Large cock = real man. Large tits = real woman. Any questions? Oh, and lots and lots of crazy intense sex means you have a real significant life. Everyone else is less than.

You have a great wit and imagination. I hope you grow into using them like an adult. Laying off the weed would help.

please keep writig as i enjoyed this piece and would love to see more from you...yeah a bit of a stroke story but it had substance and believeability to it