All Comments on 'A Bargain Made: A House Fallen Ch. 06'

by SaddleRider

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rgraham666rgraham666almost 8 years ago
Very nice work.

I am quite enjoying this story. It's a nice relief from the mediocre work far too common here on Lit.

I especially like the characters. Characters are what make a good story in my opinion.

Very well done.

SaddleRiderSaddleRideralmost 8 years agoAuthor
I would absolutely agree...

...and I'm glad you're enjoying mine.

Thank you for reading.

BaddGrrlBaddGrrlalmost 8 years ago
Deerskin?

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Deerskin_(novel)

SaddleRiderSaddleRideralmost 8 years agoAuthor
Never read it, but I may well.

Thanks for the link.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
A twisted twist

You got me on that one - haha - awesome twist! I must say, I do enjoy your protagonist consistently punishes via pleasure. Awesome!

nthusiasticnthusiasticover 2 years ago

Oooooo, the Court is going to have fun when the gossips find out about this! What a deliciously devious way to let the House of Vesik tear itself apart.

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30+, in a poly, and happy to be. I have been asked to put the Erette stories in order here if I could. I can, so here they are: Note: I have been asked to include a story order for the Erette stories for clarity, so here it is in its entirety: 1. A Bargain Made 2. A Bargai...