by Selena_Kitt
I'm really glad thatyou've decided to continue the story..Keep it up.
This series, so far, has none of the nervous tension - innocence v. experience - of the original, and just seems a humdrum cuckold stroke piece. Hanging a new story on old character names is a tad self indulgent.
I am excited to read whats next. I am very happy you continued with the story.
Life has consequences and life-changing events have long-term consequences. You are addressing the question of how her earlier adventures affect her years later. As always, you are dealing with people, with their emotions, and life in general. It's pretty early to judge, but this may be one of your best stories to date!
Next please!
Or "Unfoldings." Well, I'm not sure that one ever really ended...
Of course, what the impeccable Selena chooses to apply her skills to next is entirely up to her. But it never hurts to ask!
I usually read on Lit just for something read, the sex scenes rarely turn me on anymore. its just a part of the story.
that little bit in the bathroom, damn .. sent unexpected little twinges in some wonderfull places. :D
I've read your work for the past couple years w/o comment. I'm glad to see Ronnie back. I hope she and TJ have as much fun and discovery on this Key West trip as she had on that first one.
Selena, wonderful story! I'm so glad you're revisiting these characters. Carrie and Doc are my favorite characters in Literotica. I'm dying to see what you've done with her a sexy older woman. Keep up the wonderful work honey!
As usual I read about 30-50 stories here a week and you consistently get me harder and hornier than all the rest of the authors in this place. Thanks Selena I am headed to Palm Beach to look for Mrs B and her bald pussy.
I shall sleep well tonight! I loved the original story; and though the first chapter of this sequel left me feeling bleh, it's picking up and I Love It!
Actually this reminds me of the first time my husband shaved me . . . it was that hot! Please do keep them (and me) comming.
The scene at the end between Ronnie and TJ, especially where they reaffirm their love for each other, is PRICELESS.
Selena, you are awesome girl.
Selena, I read many stories on this site. You are positively the best. I can't imagine the number of orgasms your words have produced. For me alone it's been a huge number. Many thanks.............D
You have such talent girl! This story reminded me of when I persuade my wife to shave her pussy bare (actually I do it for her too). Then we go to the beach and I paint a little suit on her with liquid latex. I love the shock and surprise folks show as they get close enough to see that it's only paint!
tender little kisses up & down your spine, powerful hands massaging your shoulders, fingers in your hair, gently scratching your scalp as you move your head, trying to lead me to where it itches, taking my time I reach every one of them, thumbs working each side of your back, kneading the folds of your skin, lovingly then, petting you, soft strokes calming your demeanor, I won't offend you by going beyond the small of your back, even tho the delectable globes of your beautiful ass are tempting.........:
you could also turn over, if you wish, & I'll do the same to the front! I am at your command!!
I dream of you each night, just looking at those shoes gives me a hard-on!
your servant
Toooooooooo sweet written !! How very sensitive person, you are !!!
Elena 27f Greece !!!