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AnonymousAnonymous24 days ago

For the sake of your story leave off with the flashbacks. This tale is already moving slowly enough with its two page installments. The recounting of Cassidy's blowjob hijinks killed off the momentum you started to build in the first part of this chapter. 3 stars.

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