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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Wonderful..... but you can't possibly stop there!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Great job with this episode! Only one complaint; your characters need to stop smirking. It is doubtful that many people would enjoy being the recipient of continual smirks. Perhaps a thesaurus is order. Otherwise 5 stars for a generally well done chapter.

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