All Comments on 'A Beautiful Day'

Thank you. I had a pretty bad day and needed just this. Your pacing keeps the mind alert and moving. Your discipline to keep the narrative flowing from the protagonist's mind, along with events, was marvelous. Gifted isn't too strong an adjective to describe your talent. I'm sold.

Omg I died laughing..please don't stop writing..

I hope there will be a sequel or another story of a similar vein.