Don't quit your day job as this proves doens't know the basics of grammar. All and frequent over use of "..." makes the case. Besides the lack of even marginal writting the story is stupid and not worth the 3-4 paragraphs I did read.
Thanks for your interest. As always constructive comments very welcome. I am taking a break from Literotica (obviously) I hope you enjoy my stories and I am sorry I won't be able to finish some of them. I have submitted one last one. It has already been rejected a few ti...