All Comments on 'A Beautiful Wish Ch. 00'

I enjoyed this chapter and I liked how you made a cameo apperance of jack and jenifer. keep up the good work and i cant wait for the next chapters.

I wonder? Where did you get the inspiration for this story? Perhaps from The Genie Chronicles by Joe Brolly? Well, no matter where you got your inspiration, a very good start. I shall be reading the rest shortly.

The first part was way awsome. I lloved the cameo by Jennifer and Jack. But what i want to know is will we ever find out what was in there conversation? Im definitly looking forward to the rest of the story now

This is probably the first Genie-themed protagonist who actually 'needs' a Genie and all she represents to save him from his depression. It isn't like he just stumbled onto a lamp and became fuckin' godly just for kicks.

Love the shout out to Brolly.

Now I don't know who wrote what story first or maybe it's actually the same author but that is clearly Jack and his Genie Jennifer from my other favourite genie story. Wether they were included as a nod to the other story or that author based his characters off these two it's clearly them right down to Jennifer's preference for hunter green clothing

This is a rather good story but has been left UNFINISHED! I strongly suggest you do not continue to read because you will be left disappointed. The author posts on his profile every year or so that a new part is coming soon but its all lies as he never does so. If you dont believe me I suggest you skip to the last chaper and there you'll find out.

This story is unfinished This is very disappointing.

Obvious hint to Genie Chroncles and it all makes sense.

Wondering when the other story will tell this part!

I like how it doesn't have to much sex and has more mystery. Genius idea.

I can't believe how perfectly you captured me in George. The scene, where you described his loneliness actually made me break down and cry! I'm eager to read the rest of the story, but just had to leave this comment. I wish I could remember my login info for this site....

My favorite: powerful character development, interesting, thought provoking scenario and a strong ending that makes one wish to read on. Very well done.

asianToy

I'm excited to read the rest. I love how Jack and Jennifer were used in this opening. It felt very much in the spirit of the original work.

I actually relate way more to this character than I do Jack. His reaction to hearing about the date with Karen really struck a chord with me. I got down right murderous for a moment there.

Well written,

DJ

Wish you would add more

you should never leave a person hanging if your not going to write any more to the story' such a waste it started off pretty good

Genie chronicles reference right?

definitely a genie chronicles reference

Please include lesbian or bisexual tag. Story later contains these

very intriguing start...

and curious about flynndrider's comment

Holy sheet!

I can not recall last that I was so enthralled by the hook of a story. Bravo!

Very good opening to this tale!!! Even BIG guys can be bullied...

From the mundane to the esoteric; great start.

Well written and it made me laugh several times. A good story I will keep up with. 5*

Wonderful start to a Genie story. A unique approach