All Comments on 'A Beautiful Wish Ch. 03'

Very well writen, and i like how its progressing well done, lets see some more :D

Great concept and well written. Please continue this series, it can go in many interesting directions and contains some well defined characters.

If you can keep it up do so this story's great!

I am absolutly loving these stories. The depth of the characters and their love is wonderful. the sex scenes are interesting, creative and full of emotion; just awsome. Stories like these are the reason that I come to this site.

This makes me feel...sad, jealous, depressed, etc. George honestly sounds a lot like me, but maybe a bit more confident with women. I wish i could find someone to love as deeply as the Genies and masters do. or at least someone i can freaking have the courage to ask out. If anybody finds another tar, please let me know and send it to me. <: j

p.s. it makes me feel sorrow. true sorrow for what i dont have.

This is going in a completely different direction than brolly's story - and I love it. Especially the HP fantasy. Keep it up!

Love this series, as much as the Brolly stories that inspired it. And Dawn's "wand" wielding had me in horny, geeky stitches.

Awe man, I hope I find a genie like Dawn. lol that fantasy ability would be sweeeeeeettttt

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Keep up the good work cant wait for the next chapter

Why there have been no comments so far. This is is really good. There are some word choice/grammar mistakes, but this is fantastic.

There have been comments but they are all so old the system hides them by default. You can see them by selecting show more comments or show all comments. After a story reaches a certain age, and especially if it's a middle chapter in a series, people stop commenting on it. It's the same for a lot of this site.

And I agree. This is an awesome story. Better than the original. No insult or disparagement meant to Joy Brolly.

DJ

Love the sexual fantasy ability so much! I did in the original, and you did a great job with it here as well; I hope you will revisit it with other fantastic settings in future chapters. :-)

Thanks for writing and sharing it with us!

You sir are an excellent writer. Curious what happens when Georges mother and sisters get home...