All Comments on 'A Bed of Dreams'

by Venus96

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
slow sensual sweet sin

Hi, enjoyed your recollection or fantasy?...and Ponsonby reference brought a smile to my eyes, being from the same city.

x

nzemuse

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Very good work!

Excellently paced tale. Very consistent. Venus96 is an excellent writer and has a good understanding of the self-discipline required for submission.

Keep up the good work.

Marc

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
amazing

This was beautifully and masterfully written. It entranced me! Well done and thank you!

Ny

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