All Comments on 'A Beggar's Nap'

Beautiful story telling drew me from the start. So sad for Sarah .

Clara seems like a bitch and wants Eva so Sarah carnt .

its a case of style and love over substance and money , Style and love should win every time , but sadly not always the case. Such is life.

5 stars.

so they say money can't buy you love, so what did Eva do did she stay with Clara or did she go with Sarah, I hope there is another part to this story

I think one of the most maddening parts in a story arc is when the arc is not completed. This piece here is a prime example of leaving the reader with more questions than answers. Will there be a continuation...or is this all we get?? Do we visualize our own endings or will the author finish her own story. That, basically, is the question before the jury! When can we expect answer??

Loved it. Loved how much emotion and wordplay you put in 1 page and how much was left unsaid.

Strong emotion requires stories with real people. The people in your stories live lives outside anything I would encounter, but they still seem incredibly real to me. I think your ability to put us in a place is fantastic, and the dialog we hear feels authentic. It makes the story very powerful, I think.

Thank you for writing these stories and putting them here for us to enjoy.

It felt like you rushed through this one.

Your characters are usually more human and relatable, these felt more like cylons (the By-Your-Command 1970s ones).

FANTASTIC! Full of raw emotion as the unequal 'power struggle' takes shape. Thoroughly ENJOYED reading this. Well done.

I was still listening to Verklärte Nacht when I read this story. Somehow, at least for me, it fits here too.