All Comments on 'A Beginning for an End'

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0ra11yfix8ed0ra11yfix8edover 16 years ago
I'm jealous

This story is well written. It makes sense. it's exciting! It opens up possibilities. Do it again, please

n2anal78n2anal78over 16 years ago
Do they need another?

Jealous doesn't being to cover it. Wish I was there in his place.

Well written, good story, very hot.

Major Turn-on

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Pretty good

Very good start would like to see some more to this series, maybe with some more lesbian action.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Exciting but...

Well told and written. It is an exciting episode, but it was already mildly abusive and appears to be headed for more, potentially serious abuse and that folks is a <M>MAJOR</M> turn off for me!

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<I>-- srgeek --</I>

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Very erotic story- great progression

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

I suppose "No" doesn't mean "No" when women are in charge? Is that how it works? I'm not into rape, so I'll not be reading anymore of this. 2 stars.

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Better living through chemistry! Kink Test Score: 431 But then, I'm older . . .

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