All Comments on 'A Belated Gift'

Beautifully written and perfect in every way! Kudos!

Please tell me this story has a second chpt!!!!

If you love small breasts I recommend lily lit here’s are delicious as you described. Please continue with the sister

hope to see part 2 soon

Excellent. Is there a part two in the works? Jenna's got needs, too, after all.

Outstanding!!!!

Bring her sister next time! Oof!!!

Very hot!

Thanks,

FDD

Has the making of adding more chapters to this one. Will be watching for more if you do decide to continue. 4 stars.

Oh more soon please, what a great story, full of fast hot sex.

Real hot sex and a good read! Thanks for sharing.

Gratifyingly hot.

All us grey haired, beer bellied old guys do thank you.

And I agree with rayirony.

Fifty dollars well spent. Actually it was a very nice gesture with a deliteful reward. Looks like Randy may need to head to the gym to reduce the gut. He sure lasted longer then I would have, but it is a story afterall. Let's see what the sister has to say. Good story.

Great intro to a series! Please don't leave us hanging too long. What's next?

So terribly hot, and im a girl

love your description of, to me, her perfect body...petite, small girls, bush, and responsive to him and his prong...$50 very well spent, and unexpected payback....

The richness denies this as a short 'stroke' piece. The characters are too vivid. Too much depth. It's the beginning of a longer story. It's too fucking good!!!!

Now, that your started this bonfire...

WHERE IS THE REST OF THIS STORY!!!!

Part 2???? Please.

G

I loved this, your descriptions were really good.

liked it...