All Comments on 'A Believable Performance'

This is my first attempt at a romance story and I didn't anticipate how much fun I'd have writing it. If you've made it to the end, thank you for reading. I hope you enjoyed it.

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Excellent story and presentation. The hesitation and tension are palpable. Well done. Bravo.

West should have a dusting of sexy dark chest hair for that gorgeous manly chest. Jess puts her head against his chest, and runs her fingers across his chest drawing designs -- she could easily be tracing her fingers through the pattern hair on that young man'c chest! A very sexy story!

Great story, good plot pace and believable characters. Would love to see more of these two!

West is a very sexy young man who more than pleases his teacher. Give sexy West a splash of sexy chest hair for that muscular chest -- it can be a real turn-on for his teacher!

Total material for a series, as in a wonderful pilot, or maybe a novel, in my opinion a total winner. Thanks for sharing.

We need a sequel

This is a wonderful Drama. I love all it . Well done to the writer.

Loved it. Would love to see follow up chapter even more!

It is the beginnings of a really good series. I'd like to follow their relationship as they share their love for each other, and also as they overcome obstacles. Maybe a situation where they are nearly exposed or maybe a female student tries to push between them to take West for herself. So many possibilities. Looking forward to see how you develop this story.

not understanding why the ratings are so low for this story like this was such a nice read. hopefully a part 2 comes with them staying monogamous, intimate together, and loving each other. i agree with the comment below regarding to this being the beginning of a really good series.