All Comments on 'A Bespoke Gift for Mum Ch. 01'

Beautiful story between 2 people. How beautiful life can be. Well written. Keep up the high standard of this love story. 5 stars.

Written well enough to keep me interested even tho the "Sex" was tame.

Going by the story title & short description, I was about to skip the story. Oh god, not another mom-son sex toy dildo story.

But, I’m glad I didnt. A skillfuly crafted teasing erotic story. Had me pre-cumming buckets. This is quite amazing given that there is no sex in the story (as declared in the preamble). Cant wait for Ch2. So many possibilities. Dont disappointment, please soon. Saula, many thanks, & I’m onto reading your other stories which I’m sure will be as cum inducing.

So erotic! Ch 2 pls. I’m already imagining the mom/son test-driving the delivered dildo.

Very sexy read. What a clever inventive spin to the overused theme of taboo and sex toys. You are so talented. And beautiful prose too, not something I see often in literotica.

Please post Ch 2 soon

Love the sexy descriptions of precum on the son’s cockhead and the mom’s bush showing thru her highcut panties.

You’ve a very unique way writing which brings out the sensuality & eroticism in an elegant yet tingling way. Your choice of words are so apt for every situation. Classy, And you write simply in a breezy tone. You are very talented. Look forward to Ch2 & catching up on all your other stories. Thank you for giving me such literary pleasure, so unexpected in a platform like literotica.

Love this. Super cum inducing. Cant wait for ch2.

Love the parts on mom trimming the son, getting him hard, soaking up the precum on his cock head. Very sensual. For a story that has no sex, this story had me cumming pails. Ch2 pls…

ch2 soon…

Excellent. Look forward to next installment.

my first 5 star rating in years

Lovely lovely story. Five stars. Deserve more,

Cum inducing in the way it is written. Kudos to the writer who has her way in describing erotic situations. Ch2…

Very literary. Excellent story. Much enjoyed it, Very erotic descriptions. Keep it cumming. Chapter two pleeeze…

Awesome. Simply awesome. What a writer! Extremely talented.

Very talented writer. Classy too. Mom, son, dildo is an overused tired theme. But the writer has cleverly given a fresh twist to it, in beautiful prose. Luv the Brit nuances, the dry humor. I read the story in my best fake English accent & had LOL!

Sauler, I wanna take writing lessons from you. You’re more than awesome. You bring a unique style to literotica. Breezy, poetic, yet erotic.

Eg, I luv this about the foreign shop assistant character:

“The shop assistant was a young man…. He spoke lilting English in a charming musical accent that only a human instrument could emit. His name was João... He had dark, curly hair swept back like he'd just finished trekking down some Nepalese moutaintop, and was starting his shift in the shop. He had an easy way about him.”

I wish I can write so effortlessly like that!

You’ve a unique style of writing. Thoroughly pleasurable to read. Just on precum, you describe it so sensuously that I shudder:

“And just to be thorough and sure, I squeezed him. A pearly drop of arousal foamed then bubbled out of him. I rubbed his head against the crotch of my panty.”

The mom’s taboo yearnings:

“I had a heightening sense of a strange space forming inside me. A kind of pure hollow. This space signified a simple lack, a nothingness, aching to be filled, if not churned, by some male form.”

Awesome! I didnt know such evocative writing was possible in simple language.

Reading your other stories.

Ch2 soon pls?

Cum inducing story. Ch2 pls.

Another amazing story by simply one amazing writer. And just when I think she can't beat her last story, she simply does it again and again and again. Saula really has a talent here in writing erotic stories. I could read her stories all day long and be content w/ the world.

Love the mom playing with the son’s pubic hair. Love her giving him visual stimulation. Got me cummmmming. Keep on writing.

Incest/dildo such a tired theme. But you really know how to eroticize it up. Such a pleasurable read. Kudos.

Excellent writing … excellent story … please go on …

Excellent writing … excellent story … please go on …

Ch 2 pls

So cum inducing

Saula, your writing is most enjoyable! As with many others here, I hope you will publish Chapter 2 of this delightful story very soon.

Nice opening - hopefully we get to see if the gift was upto spec and used?

Story line is very exciting. I love your writing.

I look forward to the next chapter. Soon - please!!

Can’t wait for chapter two you have caught my attention

Beautiful sensitive nuanced writing that reminds me of similar writing by DesmondAndromeda on this site.

Great story. Beautiful written.

Pitty that there is no sequel, as promised...

A knew type of feeling overtook my being