All Comments on 'A Better Man Pt. 01'

by Fostery

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Jdavis77Jdavis77almost 4 years ago
Ok

Hot story but I don't like that you are making the guy look like a asshole like I mean it is clear that he loves his mom and would do anything for her and his sister I know mom has to do what she needs to to not be homeless but you can do it in a way so the good guy doesn't look like a asshole rapist

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Fun times ahead for John!

I think Emily will end up enjoying John's cock fucking her pussy. I don't know if 3 times a day will happen unless nobody works. Emma is going to be around some of the time. Five Stars

brockl3brockl3almost 4 years ago
Nice

More... Love when sons fuck their Mom from behind. Reminds me of my Mom. She would wear short nightgowns and no panties. I would catch her bending over and catching a great view of her hairy pussy. I never acted on my urges, but the images I have I will never forget. Every woman I date, I ask the to not shave and grow a big bush. When I’m having sex with them doggystyle, I imagine it’s my Mom.

far_wanderer1984far_wanderer1984almost 4 years ago

Interesting read look forward to more.

chytownchytownalmost 4 years ago
A Short Story***

Thanks.

SWIM21SWIM21almost 4 years ago
Good start

I actually like that she isn't immediately gagging for it and has to pretend to enjoy what he does to her. She should feel more angst, though. A proper emotional breakdown would help pave the way for an actual relationship because it's honest. Even if she enjoyed and orgasmed every time, her mind set won't give her peace, so something drastic needs to happen. Might I suggest a nice hard bare-bottom spanking? Beyond the sexual aspect, spankings are great for inducing cathartic release. The woman has lost everything and needs a strong hand to reassure her. Being dominated, spanked, and then lovingly cared for will release her from her guilt, shame, and stress.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Next chapter

Great story. Should be another chapter at least.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
A realistic story!

I love it. Absolutely fantastic. Everything about this is 100% believable. I just wish it was longer. Jeep up the amazing work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Good

Its a good story. Can you continue it?

johncan6johncan6about 3 years ago
More......Parts

More .....Hot She is very sub....for him.....i hope u continue

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Plz continue the story

plz write another chapter i love this one

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I have a job believing the "fact" that these guys are 18 years of age but only just out of high school! In the UK our high schoolers leave at 16/17 and are in uni by the time they're 18!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Needs chapter 2 and maybe chapter 3

agresatoragresatorover 2 years ago

How dare you not make another chapter!

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