by bluedragonauthor
Glad to see the continuance of this story. Now John needs to do whatever he can to stop Kate and then to destroy Dean
at first it was just sex scene after sex scene and I was getting bored reading it (the sex was still hot). but the emotional stuff with kate at the end sort of brought out the plot and I wasn't disappointed. Keep it up!
Been reading this for 3 days now (from John Millionaire) and up to this point I haven't been disappointed once. It's a rollercoaster keeping me on my toes whether it be a great sex scene or an emotional thrill ride. Keep this up man. You're pretty much the best around here. :)
Marty will rape and beat Kate and the model that is living with him will realize what a douche-bag he is. I am hoping that he is wiped out financially.
Kate is just dumb and John thinks only with his dick with the emotional control of a spoiled five year old. very irritating story.
Absolutely fabulous, cunt crazed fucker, Lancashire, UK. Cunt cunt and still more cunt, fucking love it.