All Comments on 'A Birthday Present From Daddy'

ruined it when you made her fuck the black guy .

not sure i liked the addition of mr. Johnson. but sexy, well-written

not great

would've been better if he was only with daddy

CAN'T SETTLE FOR JUST ONE COCK! lol

Liked it alot until the neighbor man got throw into the mix.

Why did she fuck Paul if it was just going to be a one time thing..I think she will go back for some more of the bigger cock and so does he. If she belonged to her daddy and wanted to be his. And marry him why fuck the neighbor?? Does not make since??

Fob

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"He gives her a gift she will never forget." That's about daddy and his baby girl. And the unforgettable gift he gives his little princess is a great big twatful of some of the same semen that made her. Once he shoots it up inside her, baby girl'll plug up her sweet little slit so that her daddy's precious semen doesn't leak down her ass and legs. It'll keep her warm till the next time her father blows his heavy loaded daddy-balls up her pretty little cunt.

A beautiful story , I cum on myself twice reading it . You are such a lucky dad. She is a very lucky girl.

That was perefct ! Gr8 writing ;)!

Definitely want to read more. Have Daddy fucking her up the ass and getting a threesome on with the neighbor. She needs it in the pussy and ass at the same time.

They didn't say she was a swimmer, they said she had a swimmers body with larger breasts.

Enjoyed the story and was hoping the neighbor would have fucked her in the ass

i have a friend and her name is Nicole ,she very much a part of me .and reading your story got on to that we must work on writing our story down to . i love and so want her to read it to

I think I've read this story here once before. Perhaps one very close this story line. A good job of writing by an experienced author.

RS

definately needs several sequels, with dad and the neighbor teaching their little one anal ;)

I need more of this. So hott.