All Comments on 'A Birthday Surprise'

what is next? i don't think you can top that storie, but try please!

That was a good ending to a good tale. It's nice when the good guys win for a change.

Wow! That was one fantastic story. I too love the good guy ending. I hope you continue to produce such efforts.

grade A, friend, absolutely grade A material...

That story had characters, suspense, interesting events... Loved it..

even people who hate "non-concent" could love this one! Finest 'non' story i've read yet!

That story was perfection. Best story ive read yet. I dont kow how you are going to top it but give it a shot.

That was amazing. That little slut deserved it and I loved every minute of it. Most of the stories you run into on this site have distracting plot holes and grammatical errors, but this story was perfection. Fantastic.

You have a fantastic imagination...

This story is sure to get my hubby alot of poon tonight! I am so wet right now and dear god i have got to fuck my hubby! Thank you for such an enticing piece! Happy licks to you!

only 1 thing i can think of that would have put this story over the top....they could have brought in the pet german sheppard or 2 to make her cum

I didn't even make to to page 3 before I shot my load!

Probably the best story I have ever read on Literotica ... riveting, sexy, suspenseful, brilliant!

Thank you thank you thank you

*wet*

Simply put, I love this story. Now I'm of to get something to clean of the wet spot on my computer chair.

I just wished I could have watched the same action on the last round heeled slut I dated. Good Work and keep it up

Frankie should divorce Stacy but still keep her under his control. Susan should have been impregnated by Frankie and they should marry in the next portion of this ongoing oddysey. We need this scenario to continue. HINT HINT...

Awsome Story, you have a great imagination! I think this is in the top 3 stories I have read from this site.

I really liked this. Especially the way they made Stacy beg to cum then not let her. Talk about giving her a piece of her own medicine.

Definitely an excellent story.

Fuck me running I loved this story. One of my favorite, ever! I just have a question...sequel?

You!

You need to write more stories.

LIKEWHOA.

And I will be the first one to read them.

I read it and then my wife read it and lets just say I had a hell of a good night. Keep it coming...

this was a totally awesome story, absolutely loved it. BUT you need just a little more at the end, should of had them do her and a double divorce and they remarried and fucked like rabbits.

a tad lengthy BUT well worth it :o)

How can it be retribution when the perpetrator is given what they want? If the submissive seeks abusive sexual gratification and she is given that as the "act of poetic justice" then there is no JUSTICE.

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HOT!

That was so fucking good.

Very good story. I would love too read more from U.

that was an excellent ending, i'd love to read more!

SO fucking hot!

That was fucking great.

I love love LOVE the very end >:3

The ending was perfect!

Would love a taste of Stacey's treatment!

cheat and get what you deserve

HOLY SHIT THAT WAS GREAT!!!!

THAT WAS FUCKING AMAZING HOLY CRAP

HOLY FUCK THAT WAS AWESOME DO A

SEQUEL

I loved it. I love it when a wife becomes a slut and I love forced sex whenever they end enjoyning

I give one star to everyone that uses the word cunt. Terrible writing.