All Comments on 'A Birthday to Remember'

It felt like a lot of heart went into this.

I loved it.

Felt that Jen's reaction was very realistic, great story so far!

Please continue the story! It would be good to get it edited though.

It felt as though the feelings and emotions wer so real. I do hope there's going to a follow-up to this one.

Well written, believable, nice mix of conversations. the ending was a bit of a let down but understandable - may want to revise to reflect feelings more or to set the stage stronger for the next chapter.

I know that some women who like having their nipples pinched hard also like being spanked, so maybe a spanking in the next chapter.

Lovely story. Seems so real, so human, so well told.

Please write more, I love your stories and how they make me feel.

Donox.