All Comments on 'A Birthday Treat'

loved it, very hot!

That was so hot, loved reading it & it made me so horny :-)

OKAY..BUT NOT ONE OF YOUR BEST..YOUR INTRO RE: RICK'S DAD...SHOULD HAVE BEEN THE ACTUAL SCENERIO..SO MUCH HOTTER IF HIS DAD HAD GIVEN HIM THE BEST PRESENT HE COULD HAVE RECEIVED.. "DAD"

AND EVEN BETTER HAD YOUR STORY BEEN "BI" ORIENTED WHERE MOM WAS STILL PRESENT..AND BOTH MOM AND DAD....SHOWED RICK HOW HOT ENTIRE BI FAMILY FUN IS..

I am a bisexual, mature crossdresser and enjoyed the story very much, and would love for someoneto have anal sex with me on my birthday!

Sincerely,

Josie of Augusta, Georgia

FAcebook: Josie Augusta

I was overwhelmed with the high quality throughout this fine story. I was prepared for my 1st reading as an (untrained) editor but became so involved in the developing story I lost my red pencil. Reading between the lines, the missing words Scream Out, "Read On, Read More!". And I will.

First of your stories that I've read and loved it