All Comments on 'A Birthday Wish'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Great opening, funny conversation with Aunt May, write again!

Sunnydaze361Sunnydaze361almost 2 years ago

Oliver’s attention certainly helped Jack convince themselves of just how good it is when two people click!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Lovely! More stories please…..

sissyboi69Aricsissyboi69Aricalmost 2 years ago

I need one of those candles. Very nice story. Please continue

TheAce0fHeartsTheAce0fHeartsalmost 2 years ago

Absolutely amazing. Please write more.

Raquels_PantiesRaquels_Panties12 months ago

Wait. Where is the rest of this story? I was so into Jacqueline, wanting to hear more how she felt, wanting to hear how her parents accepted her metamorphosis. Wanting to believe that someday my wishes would come true. Phooey.

Definitely 5 🌟s, but I want more. 😘

Much love,

Raquel

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