by Samuelx
I do agree with the comments above - it got extremely tedious being told how often he was bi ... how often he was 'the best' etc. Just let the story flow.
but if you choose to write more chapters on this story line (and i hope you do) please dont repeatedly put in every 4 sentences that he was with men and women i understand what bi~sexual means wether its a male or female using the expression. so other than that repeated phrase it was an awesome story n look forward to more of the Haitian's ventures of his new and exciting job.