- Incest/Taboo
- A Bit on the Side
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All Comments on 'A Bit on the Side'
by sunburycd
- 53 Comments
AzureAshabout 3 years agoThe crypto-currency concept was very well plotted into the story. The "broken drain" quip was tummy-hurting funny. But the best thing was Lydia harbouring profound feelings for Dylan for a long time -- a recurring motif in your works; something I absolutely adore and revere.
Thank you so much for another amazing and beautiful tale :)
jneric2691about 3 years agoEnjoyed your story! But, what about Gerry?!? It seems to me that Gerry is the source of all the money problems; the large house - a MONEY PIT, golfing - probably at a country club, DINNER with the neighbors - at a fancy restaurant. Maybe a second story to clear the air. If not, LOVED the story! 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟😁
Anonymousabout 3 years agoGreat story, very well-written. Thanks for allowing the mother to have pubic hair. Hope there is a part 2 (adding pee games would make it perfect for me).
Anonymousabout 3 years agoA little too fast from seeing her naked in the shower to fucking her pussy. Enjoyable!
Sex4lf57about 3 years agoThat was so fucking hot! I especially loved how you described the mom as looking like Brandi Love as that gave me a reference to go by while reading the story.
There definitely needs to be a followup chapter. She should let Gerry have the McMansion and all the headaches that come with it while she moves in with her son. Five stars and a favorite point!
Anonymousabout 3 years agoAwesome! Excellent tease keeping him (and us) waiting for final gratification. My new favorite story.
sunburycdabout 3 years agoAuthorThanks for reading and the positive comments. I told myself I'd do a second chapter if it scored 4.7+ Didn't hit that high note sadly, but do recognise its popularity. So, yep. To those asking, I'll continue the tale.
Again, thanks for taking the time to read and engage. It means a lot.
SimonDoomabout 3 years agoGood story. I thought in particular the way you built up the connection and played up the awkwardness between them was effective. I personally think that's a crucial part of a good mom-son story.
This is nitpicky, and I did not downvote the story for this, but I think this is useful: Your story is told from the point of view of a man living in California, yet he says some things that an American would not say. For example, Americans do not say "whilst," they say "while." Americans spell the word "judgment" without the "e." The word "bleeding" as in "bleeding obvious" sounds to me more like something a British person than an American would say, although an American might say it if he watched enough British television (and some Americans do, as a preference). I liked the story, but the narrator did not sound like an American to me.
Amisit__Scintillaabout 3 years agoI always enjoy reading your stories and have been a fan for quite some time. I find your mind an inspiration as so many of your works leave me wanting more.
when it comes to personal taste, i do find the whole son making his mother his "wife" and them fucking on a daily basis a little too overwhelming and off putting. That is just me though!
Thank you for yet another enjoyable read and look forward to more work from you.
x
Anonymousabout 3 years agowas good but started losing composure with the presence of Miles.
Los stars for juvenile THE END. You're still in third grade, aye mate?
lockedhubbyabout 3 years agoI always look forward to seeing a new story by you on my feed. You never disappoint. As expected this one was great. Always enjoy the build up and happy to see that you will continue this story.
linnearalmost 3 years agoAlways well written and very erotic. A wonderful seduction and the anticipation was amazing. I would love to see how they can end up together without Gerry.
Foxterot7aalmost 3 years agoThis the 1st story I have read written by you. Vert good. Enjoyed it. I hope your other stories are as good as this one,
writeroticaalmost 3 years ago"I'm ready for you." LOL! I love double-entendres.
Jesus. Another fuckin homerun, SunburyCD. Your stories have such a sense of realism for me that I feel like I am a fly on the wall of my neighbors' house watching the events unfold. This is exactly how I try to write my stories, too. Any time I come to Lit to wack off, I now go directly to your story page before searching for anything else. And that is as best a compliment I can continue to give.
Keep on, keep on.
Ray (Writerotica)
Anonymousalmost 3 years agoReading again, suggestion- Mother and son sexting stories are not available in literotica.
Rancher46over 2 years agoGood story, except it was left without a conclusive ending. Needs more chapters to do it justice. 5 stars
GeorgeGaleabout 2 years agoVery lovely story, very well written and told... I look forward to reading them all.......():\
Anonymousalmost 2 years agoGreat story. Would really love to see another chapter. It could take a number of different directions.
GrandEagle53over 1 year ago5 BIG stars. Another chapter or two would be appreciated. What's with mom's finances? What about the dildo???? PLEEEEEAAAASSSEEE, MORE!
oldpantythief12 months agoI liked the story but all of the impromptu sex, regardless of location or time, seemed to be somewhat reckless if not downright dangerous. Guess that's what happens when you find true love, especially when it's your mother, lol. Think she needs to just get rid of Gerry, what a looser. Bet he's out somewhere fucking around on her.
WishfulVagina4 months agoGreat combination of love and lust. Mom seems to be kinky, love to hear how kinky they get.
Anonymousabout 2 months agoLoved the story and please continue the saga to let us know how this love affair continues
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