by Yshomatsu
..but would have been close to perfect with the aid of some basic proof-reading. Some basic syntax and grammatical errors distracted me from the allure of the red glowing eyes of the mistress.
While I'm dying to see the continuation of the other serries, this was a great addition! Your one of the best writters here, please keep it up.
All your stories are great but I like this one in particular a lot. I enjoy your shorter, more self-contained stories the most, and this one is excellent. The whole bit with the pet names was so good, how he switches over to calling her Kitten by the end, the vampire calling him Puppy, really good stuff.
I had this story edited and resubmitted. Sorry about the original state of this story. It’s been a rough time for me lately.
Really enjoyed this one. I liked the back and forth between the hunter and the vampire queen. Keeps you guessing until the end.