All Comments on 'A Blue Tank Suit'

I never read the longer stories but this one was out of yhis world erotic! !

It kept me right on the edge the whole time and i wanted it to continue :):)

Wow, what a story. The title doesn't tell us much, especially considering how quickly she removed her suit. I would enjoy attending that relationship workshop, just to watch the two interact. Very hot and made me so wet!

if there is a second chapter, is that she would, but he might not.

Well done, nice seduction and the promise of more. His naivete was a bit much but still good writing and her emotions were nice. I write of more mature women under the name of agedmac. Would love to hear your views of what I write.

I really liked this story. You captured her feelings of lust and his nervousness almost perfectly. As an editing note her name alternates between Melinda and Melissa a couple of times near the end. Not a big deal but something to watch for.

That was so hot!

Very nice story, in some ways it reminds me of an older woman I was with when I was 20.

I love this story! And could only imagine my wife ( who is a minister's wife) teaching about responsible sex.

I 'm looking forward to reading more of your submissions!

Can I be the fly on the wall at their next meet-up

Well crafted erotica - is always enjoyable

She manipulated that guy very skillfully, and he responded the way my penis did!

This story's several years old...hopefully "next Saturday" happens soon!