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by The Fantasizer

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rearden_steel_2rearden_steel_2about 5 years ago
Pretty good

It was fun and intense but in need of some edits. Or your spell checker has led you astray. Example: use virile....not virulent. Trust me they mean very different things.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Wanting more

I was hoping for more excitement. Did she ever leave her husband for Bob. Linda deserves so much more. Another chapter or two would be nice to finally know.

Vstar67Vstar67over 4 years ago
More!

Can’t wait for more! Great story!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

First time I give 5* to each of the three stories. Write some more Linda & Bob and will be running out of stars

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