All Comments on 'A (Bot)Net of Love Ch. 01'

It's a fun concept, worthy of exploration. But decide on if it's Clay or Cray, you wrote both a few times, I gather you self edit. If you do I can understand if you go text blind and miss stuff.

All that aside, I am curious as to where you are taking this..

Hey, big thanks for pointing out that mistake, no idea how i missed that while proof reading ^^.

It is supposed to be Cray, after the real "Cray-3" Supercomputer, I will pay extra attention to not make that mistake again in part 2, which I'm currently writing.

Definitely keep going, the characters and story have already got me hooked.

It reads good ,but we're you going to build her a real body

Please continue , you have a great start it will be good to know how this develops. Will she be set free on the net.. Will she get a real body? With the advances in robots these days

I like this first part.

You will need to add some plot in next chapter.

I would humbly suggest one.

While Maxim and Aleks are on the hunt for new targets... Leaving Cray at Home...

Sasha could hook the internet without knowing about Cray in the background.

Searching for sexy clothing, shoes, lingeries, perfumes... for her strip show...

Cray looking up in the background.. Staying silent...

I leave to your imagination where and what Cray would do left free on the internet.

But then... you can add to the plot... the AI acting in such way to focus attention on Her by multiple Black op agencies in different contries that survey the internet for suspicious activity. The AI having trigger some alarm and making a few agents Trying to locate her origin. I leave the rest to your skillful imagination... LOL

Write me if you want more ideas...

Love the story, will you continue it? The characters and the writing are really good!