All Comments on 'A Box Of Rocks, Pt. 01'
by qhml1
- 62 Comments
Kahunabobabout 1 month agoThis is going to be a fun little series. Getting Sasha's train wreck of a life back on the rails seems to be a purpose Mason needs to come out of his self-isolation again. And the writing is pretty much on the wall that he's producing new stuff for Al. Good pacing, nice sprinkling of humour throughout and the story benefits from hinting at the naughty and debauchery instead of shoving it in your face. 5/5 for the first part. // Some housekeeping: I did notice you didn't include tags with this one. Might want to include some. I'd hate for people to miss your stories when they're searching Lit.
SBC97281about 1 month agoMornings that start with a chapters like this are a great beginning. The rest of this one has promise. Music Labels are presented in a form they have been known to resemble. Dingbat youth sometimes learn painfully. Ready for part 2!
Ambulabout 1 month agoA really good story from start to finish! Sasha is quite the fuckup, but Mason has her number. Look forward to the next chapter.
janus48about 1 month agoAs always a good writer can write anything! Nice story looking forward to the next chapter.
taco1085about 1 month agobravo, great story. I hope you expand this into more chapters. this is good.
Anonymousabout 1 month ago46D doesn’t mean she has huge boobs, it means she’s built like a linebacker.
SDWargamerabout 1 month agoGreat story. Loving Mason. Sasha isn't evil or trying to screw up, just seems to react quickly certain situations without thinking through all of the consequences
muskyboyabout 1 month agoLove your stories but you have your work cut out for you on this one...Sasha is not a likable character.
CastAdriftabout 1 month agoAnother great start by one of my favorite authors.
Anticipation builds!
Thanks, and
Rock On!
AileyInnabout 1 month agoThank you for the story. This guy is part of the glue that holds it all together…
Ambulabout 1 month agoSasha seems not to have figured out why she keeps fucking up. Luckily for her Mason likes her anyway and is willing to put up with it. He likes having her around. A terrific story.
muddman74about 1 month agoWow, this one almost threw me for a loop. I first started reading it and the floozy main character and her actions were turning me off to the story completely. So I quit reading it and went and read a new story by ST1956 since it was a part 2 to the story he put up last week. After reading his story, I decided to come back to this one to see if it got any better, as I saw it had a very high rating so far. And boy, am I glad I did. This is an excellent start to a new story line, Q. Thanks for posting it up and I can't hardly wait for part 2 to be published! A full 5 star rating from me!
redbaron172about 1 month agoWow!!!! what a story!! I was kind of lost at first because it's really not your style, but 3/4 way through I was thinking....damn maybe I could use some of that!! LOL... Can't wait for the continuation(s)!!!
tkh3nkey2110about 1 month agoGreat start. Not what I thought it was going to be when I first started reading. Looking forward to more.
RanDog025about 1 month agoDamn Sir, you must have been in a hurry to get this submitted due to all the typo's but one hell of an excellent story as usual! Thank you! 5 BIG ASS FUCKING HUGE FLAMING NOVA STARS!
BuzzCzarabout 1 month agoGood solid story. I'm enjoying it a great deal. A beta reader or two would be helpful on those minor annoying errors. They don't kill the story but it breaks the flow.
Demosthenes384bcabout 1 month agoSo many of these superstar stories posted here start out great then the writers grow bored and leave the series unfinished. I'm so glad I follow you so I get drug into genres I don't normally venture. I'm also excited because I know you'll finish the series to its logical conclusion. 5.0*
Sackettheartabout 1 month agoWow, not sure what I was expecting, but I enjoyed the xxxx out of it. I read it and practicly saw the movie in my head. Can't wait for the next installment. Now I'm going to have to follow the author and start reading the rest of the stories. 5 stars
oldtwitabout 1 month agoI really liked this, plenty of details throughout, the characters were described and set up well in the plot.
Yes it could be nit picked, but that’s not my style, not sure I have one.
KRD19254about 1 month agoQ you need to use MS Word, even Word would have picked up on your many misspells and miss-grammar's.
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Still nice to be reading your stuff again, missed ya. Looks like you can have some fun with this plot.
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4.8***** Hooyah. Salutes...
Crusader23529 days agoExcellent start, can't wait for more. Side note: the record labels screwed the bands, and artists all the time. That includes motown and all the others. Five stars.
mouse447229 days agoReally enjoyed the story. I liked that Sasha has a lot of get up and go. Please write more she is a fun character you have created. Many thanks
rodryder4428 days agoAll your characters for the story were terrific. I am very happy to read that you’re continuing the story. Five stars.
EastCoaster119 days agoGood stuff...five stars for this part.
Looking forward to the rest of the story, even though I think I know where it all ends.
But I know it'll be a fun ride to get there.
Rock_Solid_Texas19 days agoWell done! Just the right mix of smart ass, wit, sarcasm to create interest in your topic and make an excellent story!
dawg99718 days agoI'm REALLY liking this story!
Great characters and a storyline that has me locked in.
Q, you're one of the best authors here without a doubt.
Boyd Percy15 days agoFantastic beginning! Sometimes, growing up takes forever for spoiled young ones.
5
Anonymous13 days agoI'm enjoying the story quite a bit, but PLEASE, get a proofreader. Your stories are so much better than the way they are presented. Heck, for half of these, even a spellchecker would have caught them.
You're a very good writer. Your work should show that rather than look like it was rushed out the door.
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