All Comments on 'A Boy Who Came In from the Cold Ch. 03'

very good; however, it is too sad. I think I will have to stop reading it. :(

I wish it was me getting all that cock. Job well done, great story.

but I have to know what will happen next. Such a good story - such well written characters. And how funny you should have your villain as a Yorkshireman!!!

good one

Ran across this and thought it would be good for a wank or two. Instead I've found myself completely sucked in by the story and utterly in love with Rayne. I'm a rabid reader, and rarely impressed, but you have blown me away. I can't put this down. I know what it feels like to have a character take you on a journey, I accidentally wrote a fanfiction novel that reached more than 150,000 words a couple years back, and I can tell Rayne is taking you on a similar journey. Brilliant in every way.