All Comments on 'A Brand New Ball Game Ch. 04'

The anal thing, and then the incest thing which was a bit sudden and unprepared, were steps too far, and I got disengaged with what until then was a wonderful story. But the writing about lesbian sensuality and mutual pleasure is superb.

The incest thing is not my scene. But the description of climbing orgasm before that was great, so I grab that

The story was already great, Beth then Christine and the sensuality if it all. A little bit of fetish teased here and there, but then Beth and Chris at the same time? Poggers indeed. I hope there is more to come.

I was good till the incest, not my thing. I feel genetics and biology are not the only things that make that wrong in my mind.

I love this story, perceived ups and downs included, because life is like that. Keep up the great work and thank you Christine :)

This the second story of yours I have read the first being “a kiss before dying”. I really like your description of the scenes. I might just have to read all your stories before I make a declared comment under S9808. Cannot log in on my phone. Very good English for an American.

Only criticism being the first story was more a story as opposed to a series of incidents. Personally preferred the former.

Great story I read all 4 parts. 5 stars fror all would have enjoyed Callie participating in some watersports.