All Comments on 'A Bride's Request'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

What? From experiment to swinging before marriage. Why marry? She should have just stayed single. Fiance as well.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
omg

Omfg I am so hot now I also cummed with the to girls

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Nicely done

It is a good story and pretty well written. Sort of hard to follow at the beginning (such as how could the bride not know her friend was a lesbian?) and I originally just skipped parts (later when back and re-read), but halfway through you seemed to hit your pace and the rest was fine. Keep working on the character development and realistic conversation, but it was a fun read, so thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
There is no marriage here. Just fuck buddies.

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