All Comments on 'A Bridge Between Worlds Ch. 03'

Thanks, finally a part of a story where the average guy, in all ways, gets the girl. I know that there are great stories out there where the size of a guys cock is never mentioned but in the stroies where it is the size is so out of the average. Thanks for another genie character that loves her master unconditionally and he is happy with himself as he is as Conner seems to be.

Should be up in a day or two.

Shouldn't they also try to persuade him to give Amber as much free will as possible, not to abuse her, etc?! It does not seem as if you have thought this through. The guy agrees a bit too easily.

The portrayal of Connor Preston is one of a master still in the fledgling phases of his relationship with his genie. Thus, he hasn't had time to become drunk with power yet, and is more easily open to such a suggestion. As you'll see in the coming chapters, most of the other masters they will encounter are far different from Connor.

The playful dialogue at the end was also very hot and endearing. It is a pity you came away here with relatively few views. I thought the scene with Amber was over too soon, but you really got creative there. Kudos.

The scene with Amber and Connor was very fun for me, as it was the first time in this series, or in my previous series, "An Unforgettable Melody," that I was writing a love scene with characters other than Mike and Melody. It served as a bit of a clean slate, which was very fun and refreshing. As you can tell, I've tried to introduce a lot of new characters in this series, allowing for a more large-scale storyline, though I'm finding that this results in a more action-oriented story as the narrative progresses, with the love scenes becoming more spread out. I try very hard not to write a love scene for the sake of itself; rather it must be integral to the plot in some way. I don't like shoehorning a love scene in just because "the story's not erotic enough," or whatever. Connor and Amber are great characters, perhaps worthy of a spinoff someday, but way to early to think about that. I always finish one project before moving onto another. Anyway, sorry if I'm rambling. Thanks for reading!