All Comments on 'A Brother in Need'

What a lovely story, I love reading about girls who like cock, I once gave my brother a blowjob but for some reason I didn't want him fucking my ass, I like the bit about the spitting cock, but I try to keep my eyes open as I my boyfriend's cock explodes I Iove to see the huge strings of his creamy jizz coming towards me as he sprays it on my face & tits,

Interesting premise.

Sex much too rushed.

Needed much more in the way of teasing preliminaries before her mouth took his cock in.

Lots of opportunity for extended involvement of her breasts/nipples before moving forward.

Needed some angst about the incest factor.

Needed some dilog about what Gigi's teasing -- but not following through to completion -- was doing to him. Blue balls that needed relief.

Three stars.

A good story,but some parts just seemed incomplete

He came in her pussy, is she knocked up now? I enjoyed the story

I like the looser bitch being displayed as the useless cock tease. Men don't want to have to figure out a puzzle. It is not in our primal nature when it comes to breeding. The woman who knows to take what is hers will be rewarded just as his sister was with the pounding she deserves and desires. To quote the greatest comedian to ever walk the planet Sam Kinesin "ladies, if there is something you want, you need. Something that really does it for you. That really makes you hot, turns you on. TELL US! we will FUCKING DO IT!!"

5 Stars! Please continue.

I quite liked this one. I enjoyed the pacing. It was just right in my opinion. You didn't drone on too much and kept the mood of the story squarely on the situation with the non-chalant confession of long-term feelings from the sister later into the story. Well made, one of my faves this year. Easy 5 star from me.

You also sprinkled juuust enough moral thinking in there to satisfy the taboo crowd :D

next chapter please.

I like your writing style.

Loved it, and that comment in the start had me laughing at the start, like your style

1 star for lying tags

I could see myself enjoying more

When mom finally witnessed my younger sis and me fucking she watched us for however long (apparently) waiting until we had our mutual orgasms before she let us know she had watched us. We were an attractive family. We were never in trouble, stayed clear of drugs, and were very liberal in what we wore, or didn't wear around the house. But it was apparent from our frequent hugs and kisses we cared for each other while we obviously were always sexually attracted to each other. Mom had long known we were sexing because my gorgeous little bossy-in-a-nice-way sister (who acted much older than her years) told our mom months before during one of their 'serious talks' (mom had cautioned sis against having a 'big mouth.') Sis replied that she would definitely take mother's words to heart but her big mouth was necesary to suck her brothers 'big cock.' Sis confessed to our mom she couldn't keep her 'big mouth' off of her mother's son's 'big cock,' "So, please..., find a way to get used to it, Ma...!" Mom was made to realize she was not going to stop sis and I from fucking when our mom's attempts to get us to stop proved futile. She resigned herself to living with a young 'married couple' whose bossy young beautiful wife never wore clothes... The kids? Yeah. That's another story...

Tags look okay to me. More please!