All Comments on 'A Cafe au Lay'

by KR

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blueyedbobblueyedbobover 13 years ago
that was fun

oooh my, what great sex! loved it,,good story, great description of the action,,i was right there with you both!! i'll have a 2nd helping of cafe au lay!! please

SweetLittleLiarSweetLittleLiarabout 16 years ago
Excellent indeed!

Very well written; loved the protagonist and her wicked ways. Not sure Kurt deserves her <lol> ... but perhaps he'll learn to appreciate her in time. Great job!

MilkChocolateAmazonMilkChocolateAmazonabout 16 years ago
Fantastic

Agree with the last comment. That was one mind blowing story and definitely a well deserved E. Superb!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Sexy

That was absolutely amazing. Adored Kurt, very hot! Liked that he was sweet but commandeering at the same time. The sex was amazing and your protagonist very naughty! Brilliant.

Lady StarlightLady Starlightabout 16 years ago
wonderful!

beautiful writing. loved the story. reminds me of someone i know - sexy and very prudish about public displays of affection. wonder if i can tempt him into something like this!

DuccDuccabout 16 years ago
Another fine, fine story

Thank you!

I was able to climb right down and inside this one.

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