All Comments on 'A Café with a View Ch. 03'

by KingsWoman

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fanfarefanfarealmost 9 years ago
amare questa storia

KW un fantastico completamento di questa creazione amaxing del tuo. Adoro bene abusato Britishisms.

Hot sex, human pathos, motorbikes, whats not to love?

I really laughed at your breaking the fourth wall with your protagonist's introspection. Myself, in my own stories, I gleefully kick it down every chance that comes to whim and then flip a bird to the english major generals always whining their disapproval.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
SUPERB!

I loved the description of the HOG "fingering [her] heart." Priceless!

I LOVED your exposition of the prior relationships of these two characters that brought them together. Delightful and heart-wrenching and touching at the same time. SUPERB, SUPERB, SUPERB!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Brilliant!

Just brilliant!

RimmingloverRimmingloverover 8 years ago
Brilliant

Your best story yet KW. Superbly written and with the content I love. I can't wait for your next story.

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