All Comments on 'A Call To Cum Home'

Is this amateur hour, damn spelling mistakes unbelievable situation must be a kid

Holy crap this was awful!

That's not the number of stars.

Please just stick to reading other stories. 0/5

Glad it was short

What was that?

You need to work on some things if you plan on writing more

what kind of mindless gutter trash is this?

Id like a follow up of the father coming in and fucking the wife and daughter too

This is a great idea for a story.

This is a terribly written story.

Hope there’s more to the story

Seeing the pen name, I know I won't be reading any your stories.

Editing can do wonders for a story. You should try it sometime.

What an absolute asshole, what kind of shit would do that to his mother and sister, especially with the intention of getting them pregnant.

Damn panda you need an editor you need to start proof reading you story! I still gave you five BIG ASS FUCKING STARS!