All Comments on 'A Capable Businesswoman'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Not Incest

Adoptive does not qualify for incest. Was doomed from beginning. One star at best

ManoBlueManoBlueover 5 years ago
Awful

So bad, plot was garbage, grammar was terrible.

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

"I was just Dinner."

No; you were & are a horrible author!

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Although I love the USA and have family there, I'm sick and tired of the American male obsession with huge breasts. To say its infantile is an understatement. Couldn't agree more with Anon and ManoBlue's comments.

LechemanLecheman2 months ago

WTF was that?

Too confusing, no development of the characters and who is Richard (other than a twat)?

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Stories are just too much fun to not write them. I scribble short stories and now novels. I doodle sexy images. And I do both to create visual novels and games. I'm currently working on a visual novel version of "A Matter of Will," available for free, with a new chapter every...