All Comments on 'A Carpenter's Carol'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
incest?

Perhaps it's taboo? This is well written as southern gothic but where is the incest and where oh where is the erotica?!

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleover 19 years agoAuthor
editor: Chose catagory!!

I put it as BDSM~

With a foot note that they could put it where they felt it best fit since this story has romance, hints of incest, bondage, non-human, sci-fi...and they chose incest, I hardly feel you should judge a story by catagory, just content!...thanks anon for the bum vote...<grin> The story still ROCKS!!!!!!!!

OKAY IT'S CHRISTMAS IT "JINGLES"

Thanks

Art(*_~)

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Delicious story!

Categories suck! This is a great story by any standards, and it's a real pleasure to read good prose in whatever genre. Thanks for a subtle, complicated, gratifying and sweet read!

Erotica_WritingsErotica_Writingsover 19 years ago
loved it

I loved it, very well written and a great plot, kept your interest. Got me feeling very warm :)

Happy Holidays

AnnoraAnnoraover 19 years ago
Breath takingly written

This isn't anything but a work of art that stands on its own merits. Wow one of your best Art~

Thank you for the entertaning read...

templemindedtemplemindedover 19 years ago
i'm here

great story, very well written. who cares what cat. it's in just as long as it is good and enjoyable to read

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
I'd say BDSM not incest

That BDSM scene really squicked me and I wasn't expecting it. Other than that lapse, I'd give the story a solid 4

Virtual_BurlesqueVirtual_Burlesqueover 19 years ago
A Lovely Pastiche . . .

. . . leavened with just enough unfaithfulness to permit your account to present its own variant of the moral amid fresh scenery.

Genres are but phantoms, the story's the thing!

sacksackover 19 years ago
certainly original

You can't be accused of copying anyone, there is nothing like this on Lit. Good luck!

cookiejarcookiejarover 19 years ago
Nice Work Art...

I enjoyed the change of pace with your story. Period pieces really interest me. Good Luck!

LilDarlinLilDarlinover 19 years ago
Sneaky~

I loved the whole story~~!! Had a lil taste of everything. Kept me guessing till the end~~ sneaky one here Art~!!! Had a great plot, characters were solid, and the story hit home. Good one here~~!! More Plaese~~!!

Black TulipBlack Tulipover 19 years ago
'What the dickens?

I enjoyed reading this story.

First because I like historical setttings and your's was very nice. Second, because it is a genuine Christmas Carol.

A great addition to Literotica.

Good luck.

cuddles073cuddles073over 19 years ago
interesting

Very interestiing i really enjoyed it. I am going to keep an eye out for your next one. Makes you think about the real world and what can happen. keep up the great work,,,huggs

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
a christmas carol

witty and clever...wonderful story

happy holidays

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Enjoyed the read

Hi,

Love your erotic imagination.

Could have done without the pain parts but thrived on the sexually aggressive women in your stories. Too bad they are not even longer.

Look forward to reading more soon.

IcePrincess66IcePrincess66over 19 years ago
Extremely well written

I enjoyed it very much. Looking forward to more stories.

Dana GallagherDana Gallagherover 19 years ago
Love it!

Great story Art!! Wonderful!

I loved the way it was like the Christmas Carol, without being blatantly so. I mean I didn’t even realize it until the end. The sex scene in the barn was an interesting twist, but the story would have been great even without it, though after all this is erotica so you can’t do without the sex. At times I wish lit had a general category in which you could put stories that don’t just meet one genre. It was a great story and a wonderful read! Thanks, missygail

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Your story made

me smile. It's beautiful and kinky...Great job.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
that was just awesome

i think it was very exciting and very erotic. i also wish someting like that would happen to me.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
wtf

why did you put this in the incest/taboo area there was no incest or taboo please put your stories in the proper catagory

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
yes yes

MY GOD this is a great story it caputured my curisoty im just speach less wow great story

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
excellent

MAKE A HELL OF A MOVIE,Tom SELLECK AND HILLIRY SWANK AND ???

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
another idiot wannabe writer

no incest, no taboo and no end this would have got better ratings and comments in the novels area or nonerotic area you wasted it here.

MC117MC117almost 11 years ago
Not bad

Although no incest, (apart from the hinted sister love) not too bad. Would have been better somewhere else.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Shame people don't check how to spell!

'your' frequently used when it should have been 'you're' because the writer was intending to say 'you are'!

'cesna' instead of 'Cessna'!

And many other errors made reading a bit puzzlesome!!

Larryadkison12Larryadkison12about 2 months ago

Best story I've read today. No unseat but still a great story.

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