All Comments on 'A Casual Pick Up'

Fantastic story! I would love to experience that as either of the two....

will we be reading any morestories of Jasper or Paul? I liked them both!

I loved your story, you captured the eroticism of the situation perfectly. I really related to Jasper as I was seduced as a young man by an older man back in the 60s when it was, thankfully a lot safer to let him cum inside me. Thanks

Having been in Paul's place a few times, I can say that this story perfectly captures how its done the right way. God, this story is hot!!!

Well written and very arousing.

really great and erotic.

Oh for a return to that wonderful first time feeling a nice cock spurting into you, thanks for the memory, now tell us more

Beautiful, honest and incredibly hot. 10 out of 10.

Thank you for a great story and hot details, I felt every inch of it.

Hot hot hot!!! I came so hard reading this. You, sir, are a natural.

i want your cock inside me ,fill me with your hot cum

I hope my first time is as good as that

This is a top story because it is realistic. The sex is how it should be and there is a sensible story to hold it. Well done!

thanks got a fantastic erect cock in my hands ready to shoot my spunk

Is im fuckable right now ! this story made me known now that i want to try a man.

That story was soo awesome I want that to happen to me soo bad now. yum

Please please please someone make luv to me like this I've been curious for so long now I want a gorgeous man like this to make me feel like Jas. I love this story so hot.

A wonderful story about a first experience. This should be continued with these two getting together for more m2m sex. Jazz seems a lot like me in that he will be a cock sucker and a bottom and I truly love being both.

So very sensual and erotic. More please

I've fantasized being taken anally for years now but I've never had it happen to me. Actually my biggest fantasy is being taken anally and orally at the same time,repeatedly by a group of men while blindfolded and bent over with my hands tied behind my back .

Please write a sequel with the same characters

Compelling, erotic, and wonderfully written. It finished far, far, too soon for my liking; I felt there could have been another few pages of delicious discovery for the boy.

M

Very erotic and arousing. I have fantasized about doing that.

Taken for the first time and became a man to.

Beautiful story. made hard , and wishing some would take my cum .

Beautifully crafted story of a gentle male seduction and the powerful emotions of a first time experience for a young man. Powerfully arousing for me and wishing my first time had been so amazing! Thanks!