All Comments on 'A Catian's Dream Ch. 02'

This is the stuff I was waiting for! Such great fun it is to read and so much more now that you decided to expand the story and flesh out the world-building aspect of it too. The only remark, and this is since the first reposting, that we have to wait so long between chapters. Otherwise another clear 5* with high hopes and expectations.

For those of you longtime readers confused as to the reappearance of A Catian's Dream on Lit, I have heavily edited the early chapters and am re-releasing them on a monthly basis. Check my profile's biography for more details.

Thanks so much for revisiting this story the first time I read it I thoroughly enjoyed it

But it felt unfinished. Eagerly awaiting further installments 5 stars.

I liked the old version, but always hoped I would eventually see the rest of the series. This new version (because this is much more than an editing) looks to be excellent. I am really looking forward to seeing much more of it.

OeldeWolf

I'm really enjoying this one, lots of potential. I never read the earlier version, sad to say but I'm hoping this is a much longer story than two chapters.

For me, this is the first time I have read your story. So I have no idea what is going to happen next. As I read this chapter, I have a plot point I wish to address.

I get the distinct impression that Jon is close to having his diplomatic team mutiny on him. The only times he is interacting with his own embassy is when he flys to the space station? That leaves his team in the charge of minister Shettley. She is who they know and take directions from. If push comes to shove, I expect that they will take her side. Again he leaves the embassy, but now saying, "Now, if there's nothing more to discuss? I will leave you two to craft the latest report. Use any and all footage you captured of me today and edit it as you wish. But make sure that the Council understands: we are delivering results." He’s practically telling them that they can usurp his place! They can make it out that in spite of him, THEY are delivering results! This is not how embassy’s run. Jon could be removed simply because he’s going native in the eyes of his government. If they think that he no longer has their interests first and foremost, well ...

So that’s my take on it. I’m on the the next chapter now.