All Comments on 'A Catian's Dream Ch. 03'

Accidentally posted an earlier draft! Apologies for the random notes in the middle they should be fixed in a few days when they accept my correct copy!

Sure wish more folks posted stuff that foregoes sex for world building as you do in this series and this chapter in particular. Loved the character development in both John and the pryde as a whole, it sure takes a lot to confess one loves somebody and then even more so in a situation such as this. Hopefully you'll release the next chapter sooner than in 3 month, but if not I'm cool either way, quality over quantity!

5* all day long!

A merry Christmas and happy new year!

Beautiful series, can't wait for more! I don't remember in "halfbreed"that the Catians were our first alien contact. Five Stars!

Well done! I was hoping that Jon would develop better relationships with the pryde. This approach of having something to bond with the individual members is definitely the way to do it. I was wondering what you would do to have Jon and the girls share these bonding moments. Again, well written chapter.

Please I need more of this absolutely amazing story!!!!!!!!!

I would love to see more of this story

I read this story before but there was more were it left off were he becomes there mate or is this another story ?

Hey there Anon. You are right, the author did write a version of this story with a lot more in it in the past, but it did not have as much story telling as this one if I remember correctly. They took it down and replaced it with this a rewrite. I wish that they had left the original up, or left a way for anyone to still view it. They haven't updated their patreon since late 2020, and after waiting 3 years for another chapter, I have given up hope that they will continue this story. I hope that they are alright wherever they are.

Excellent start!

11/10 Yori Fruit!!!!!

I really wish you'd continue this series, it's been in my bookmarks forever and I'm loath to remove it just in case you pick it back up.

I wish this kept going. The story is very good. Your characters are easy to like and the culture clash angle makes for believable tension.