All Comments on 'A Cautious Trust'

1. If this is chapter one, say so IN the title.

2. 28 is NOT an older man compared to 21 years.

3. Get an editor who will help you cut down on all the unnecessary words, I was ready to give up less than a quarter of the way down the page, far too wordy to describe things.

Don't listen to such hateful talk. This was a lovely story and very romantic