All Comments on 'A Chance at Passion'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Great story!

Waiting for the next chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Awesome

My god, that was an excellent story. They're going to meet up one day, right? Good writing. Keep it up and give us the next chapter soon.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
But, but....

Its pretty rare to get emotionally involved in a porn story, but Ill be damned if I didnt get a little misty eyed at the ending. >_<

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Well done !

Amazing story Looking forward to next one. "Clean your own fucking house."

Perfect!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
What happens after the ending...

They meet up in New Mexico.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

It had some nice moments, but for a story set around a poker tournament, it would have been nice if the author had some familiarity with either poker or tournaments.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Great story, spoiled by the lack of a good proof reader. His glass of milk mysteriously became orange juice. Spelling mistakes. Etc.

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