All Comments on 'A Chance Encounter Ch. 02'

Wow, I most certainly didn't see that plot twist coming, shines a whole new light on the situation. Their own relationship is developing nicely as well and I'm positively surprised they didn't engage in sex at this point, goes to show they are serious about this potentially being the forever type of thing. I'm looking forward to see how and where this leads them, hopefully the nurse has some interesting details for them. And of course keeping my fingers crossed for a very happy ending as well.

As for the aussie slang - by this point is making me laugh more than anything else, keep it coming as it gives the story a really nice authentic flair. Plus it's nice to read different styles of the same language, something the UK writers could be proud of too.

Once more gave a 4* because I believe you can still do better, this chapter just proves how you evolve your writing style and horizon ever further.

Do a neat swan dive and retrieve the lighter. Make sure to surface with said lighter between teeth, or forget to cum up for air.

RS

A little tough to follow at times. Not sure who was talking and/or thinking. Confusing and rough. Still, the content was absolutely stellar, rating a 5+++. (Why don't they give you a 10 scale? Other stories I rated a 5 would have been a 7 or 8 but yours a 10). My yank tuned ear had trouble at times with phrasing and words (I can do brit/scots/irish/welsh speak better than aussie). My prob, not yours. Overall loved it. Can't wait for next installment which might get a bit steamier? Maybe yes, please?

I'm hooked on this story, it's easy enough to understand what their saying even when i don't know the word, and it has a wonderful humorous sense to it that i just love, i voted 5/5

intense, refined story keeps you captivated

Chapter 2 'next verse same as the first .' Obviously I've up.

Why don't I meet some beautiful woman with smallish tits or even if flat chested, with A or A + ( plus cups ) is prepared to let me lick & suck her hairy Pus at after I shave it lovingly, carefully &. ( Gently ) FOR HER & GET, MAKE IT ,BALD TO INCITE HER MORE & LEAK HER JUICES MORE TO LET ME LICK HER PUSSY MORE. ! 😜😍😘😘👅👃💇👲