All Comments on 'A Chance Encounter Pt. 01'

Very promising so far. Looking forward to the next instalment.

Superb start! Thank you very much, eagerly awaiting chapter 2.

Fantastic start on what looks to be a great story.

A dynamic start to a lively story. looking forward to the next chapter

Good story but not a romance.

I haven't run across any of your other stories but after reading this well crafted instalment I amcertainly goint to check them out. Looking forward to he next part of this one.

Great beginning!

5

Good story want more keep it going.😀

ok, so far...

Great story so far, looking forward to next part and to read more of your works. Keep up the good work.

Good start

Very good so far, it’s well paced, we’re rooting for the two main characters, plus there’s a frisson of attraction between them, plus the tension and jeopardy coming from the central plot, in short there’s not much more you could have done, apart from possibly putting the two chapters into one, however I know there are readers that prefer shorter stories or parts of stories, so I do understand why it’s presented as two parts. Cheers Ppfzz.

You do have a knack for creating good-guy characters who have hearts of gold and skills to match. Very fine first half. On an amateur scale (suitable for this site) you rate a 5. If you aspire to professional caliber, I suggest you get a proofreader/editor with a solid grasp of and ruthless eye for good and correct craftsmanship.

Loved this story part 1 and 2. Please keep up the good writing.